literature

Blind

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waterrat
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Literature Text

I see me in your eyes
I'm looking too hard
I can't see you
Describing Haiku's kind of defeats the object.

My first try so feedback would be gratefully appriciated :) (Smile)
© 2002 - 2024 waterrat
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nekussa
you can really read in to something like this . good writing